Jumat, 07 Oktober 2011

A simple paragraph about Maharani

I and Maharani

     Hello, I'm Devi. Do you want to know about my close friend? I'll introduce her to you. I have several friends at campus. Some are my campus fellows and some are my class fellow. But the best among them is Maharani, who is my class fellow. I got to live on campus from Monday to Thursday with my close friend, Maharani. Someone who is simple and kind, smart, pretty, and childish. She was always willing to take the time to help me if I needed a friend to accompany me to go to a place where I wasn't brave enough to go alone. Sometimes, I call her "ndut" because her body is more fat than me. She looks so attractive when singing. That's why, she always says, "Singing is my life". She wants to be a good singer. In addition to singing she really liked the western culture, especially Hollywood actress and movie. Everywhere, She always talks about that. "Julia Robert is my favorite actress, and I always watch movie which are played by her", she said. She thinks Pretty Woman is one of the best Hollywood movies, starring Julia Roberts. Her favorite part was when she imagined to be a woman in the movie. Truly, she is a woman with a golden voice and good taste of movies and artists. I wish she could be a famous singer later. All of the memories of our friendship will remain etched hearts. 

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Refika Amaleea Fitri mengatakan...

Cool writing with clear description. Please give the mark to the topic sentence as well as concluding sentence. It's already good though u still have to be more aware to the 'lil things such as the use of punctuation, conjunction, and a bit grammar. Keep in mind, Dee, when u talk the habit of someone, u hafta use simple present. However, 2 thumbs up for d words u use. Awesome:-)

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